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Final: fixed some spots, lightings, clipping masks, text. Was unable to smudge left =(



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v2



Its for the Sig Wars but I'd like some comments before submitting =)

Comments and construtive critiques appreciated!

Original here:
http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x5/m ... sorrow.jpg

i think you did a very good job, i really like the text,

I agree, text is simple and isn't distracting, it fits. V2 Overall is more eye appealing to me, especially with that small brightness in the text. Although the lighting by her head it's a tad bit too bright, i'd tone it down. I would have liked to have seen a tad bit of smudging around the left side and what not as well. It was a really interesting stock, you did a good job with it milly.

I'll smudge it around more.
I think I'm setting the layer blending mode wrong.

yup. we looooose

it looks great but i think you could use a little bit more blending on the right side, dont erally like it cause its completely white. Mayb tone it down a little?

why yuu change your name milly? >_<

I think I need to erase some parts and fine tune it with the lighting when I go home.

i love the txt, and i'm a sucker for movie borders T_T

however, imo the white behind your person is a bit too much.
thats just because the person wears a white shirt, which makes
it hard to see "where the shirt stops and the white begins".
i'd tone it down a little, close to the shirt.

anywho, looks good. you're getting better and better.

<3

dam they both look good... v2 is much better imo

Looks brilliant, i like the vibe.

She looks like Colbie Callait btw :/

Looks like I got some competition..

I told you we're all here to stop you from being the sig master

Yah! I love this one, Milly! :] Every single tag you post, you get better and better.
As a quick critique, I think that your tag is a little too bright - especially V2. Whether intentional or not, I didn't know that the streak of white were actually wings until I took a look at the stock. If you sought to disguise the wings and turn them into that streak of light, then it was a job very well done. If not, then I think it'd be best if you toned down the light just a little bit. I love the wings, and right now they're kind of being blinded by the brilliant light. That's just my humble opinion.
Your text, font, and color is just lovely. There isn't a thing I'd change about it. Love, love, love.
And just one last thing that I loved compared to your previous tags is the size of it. Whether you'll be keeping to this size from now on, I just want you to know that I love the size is all. xP

At least ONE person understands not bigger the better Lul.
Well the last sig I made it big on purpose because there was a lot to fit. There was Tan Wei looking back, her reflection in the mirrors, and flowers and sh1t. The previous one to that, peace, one had a specified size.

I personally love this size though, and honestly I love it beacuse HOLLA does it so well in that size.

i'm really lovin the v2 v1, not liking so much didn't like the text in v1 though.was kinda big >_< i like the text in v2 though

Fixed some issues.

I smudged left some more but I don't know what blending mode to set to for it to show >.> My noobness takes me nowhere.

i cant really see what you fixed
mayb took out the pinkish lighting?
but if you were going for the angel wing effect it worked

Unless the girl in the sig is yourself or someone you are a fan of, I'd take it out. I really dislike it when people put pictures of people who are complete strangers-but thats just me. Even if theyre good-lookin they're not worthy enough to put in YOUR sig, and then again, that just my preference. If you took the girl out and photoshoped just that cityscape behind you, 10/10

Edit:

The girl is Hamasaki Ayumi. The picture is a promotion thing from Endless Sorrow, one of her albums. Her songs aren't exactly my favorite but I have few that I really like. I don't go for random celebrities or other people.