NSR <> Knocked Out

Swindler · **Posted:** Sat Jan 19, 2008 10:56 pm

C'n'C ty

Aesthetic · **Joined:** Dec 2007 **Posts:** 191 **Location:**

cool haha i like the motion blur. red part on the arm seems kinda off though

TwelveEleven · **Joined:** Mar 2007 **Posts:** 3806 **Location:** Heaven

Yes the red looks kind of awkward..

Faiien · **Joined:** Oct 2007 **Posts:** 889 **Location:**

yes you need to fan out the red more and make it into a V instead of just a straight line
text could use some work

Swindler · **Posted:** Sat Jan 19, 2008 11:16 pm

gonna fix that tommorrow.. im to tired now

HOLLAstir · **Joined:** Aug 2007 **Posts:** 1637 **Location:** 206

I agree. The red on his arm looks like a tribal paint job or something. I like the idea a lot. I've seen a lot of good boxing tags. Text placement is great, i'd move it over a nudge or so to the right. Font kills it, I would go with something a little more simple. Try to smudge out the blur effect to create more of a realistic effect. A little bit more smudging and distortions around the render would have been nice. Did a decent a job though, good job <3

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