The style is fine, it's the execution of the style that makes it art. I support you, but to support you, you need to learn from what we say and improve. Text does fit, it's the color it's in. On brush light source needs to be refined a little more. Her wings look like they were affected by your C4D or something. Border is okay but the colors are a little too girly. I know you can improve JC

I support you all the way, this is how i support you.