tbh, i kindof hate it
not only the colors of the render and bg (i know, you used the colors from the
render, but i dont like the render's colors either), but also the colors of your
border and text completely dont go with the rest of the piece.
the background, i don't like it. it looks really flat cause of the lack of shadow,
lighting and other depth effects. the text is too plain and is really hard to read
on the dark yellow (orange?) line in the background.
all and all, i'd give it a 3,5-4/10 as it is. not cause i dont like your work, but
because i know (and have seen) you can do better than this.