reK wrote:
The focal in the sig isnt very clear. Ans text colour could b better. Mayb if you look at some tuts and you could learn a thing or two. And the quality looks like its lowered.
I believe he followed this Tut:
http://www.tech-gfx.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=10164
I believe in that guy's final version, he added text in the exact same area that you did. I have to admit, yours turned out quite a bit better than mine, although I'm going to have to say that I don't think it's clear enough - your render is much too blended in. On top of that, like everyone else stated, the text is much too dark.
Other than that, it looks good. 7/10 from me.