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Sunaj
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Post subject: Constructive criticism of my sig please  Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 9:50 pm |
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Ok got some "crits" from feba already now for Rizla and tha others, what can I do to make this sig better?
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 10:20 pm |
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The person on the bottom right corner, make him more clear.
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Rizla
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 10:23 pm |
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ok I know you said the gold thing on the left is the edge of her sword, but we cant tell that, only you know cause you made it, I would edit it out or find a way to make it easier to identify. Your focal point (the girl) is blurred, try sharpening it a tad for clarity. Move the text away from your focal slightly, or keep it there but have it interact with the girl, not like its just dropped in. I dont know what this face is in the lower right hand corner, but Im not digging it, it distracts and harms the flow of the image, its like getting derailed every time my eyes move across it. try to implement a contrasting color or effect behind and/or working with your focal point.
past that, I would hit up some tutorials on effects, lighting, depth, and color/color correction.
omg 420 posts. nice.
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feba
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 10:30 pm |
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pretty much agree with Rizla, although I'd brighten up the face a bit, or darken the background (as it is, the big splash of red next to her face is more distracting than the character), but then I dislike dark things so it's your choice.
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Sunaj
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 10:33 pm |
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Ok thanks, that guy was slashed by her, took the shots from an anime called Claymore.
I guess i can take him and the sword out, cuz just by her face alone would invoke anger, and the red would help.
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feba
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 10:58 pm |
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I still think the red is too bright, but again, that's personal opinion. Although it looks really weird with your avatar  You're going to have to make really long posts to keep that from happening >.>
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Sunaj
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 11:17 pm |
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feba wrote: I still think the red is too bright, but again, that's personal opinion. Although it looks really weird with your avatar You're going to have to make really long posts to keep that from happening >.> OI!!!! u just sendin me to do more work..avatar now rofl
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Xanovaria
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 2:25 am |
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Try some levels if you're using photoshop it would make it real nice.
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Shadowman20818
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 2:32 am |
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Did you know you can actually use shades of red and black? Not just blood red.
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 2:48 am |
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i think its is preety good but i agree with Twelve that you should make bottom right person a bit more obvious.
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