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MasterKojito · **Posted:** Tue Apr 21, 2009 3:06 pm

Hayyya

_Angels · **Joined:** Nov 2007 **Posts:** 707 **Location:**

i lol'ed xD
i have no idea wut im looking at xD i see clipping masks, overlay and screens
its a bit to messy imo *serious looking*

Miguez · **Joined:** Nov 2008 **Posts:** 5003 **Location:**

Don't get it.

Seems like.. Weird.

RogueKiller · **Joined:** Jan 2008 **Posts:** 1893 **Location:**

Thee_UniQue wrote:

Don't get it.

Seems like.. Weird.

How helpful!
OnT:
Its very messy. From the picture of the killzone character to the city background to the C4Ds, its very hard to make out what it is, or what is going on.
Less C4D spamming and less of those white lines. Just needs less things with more focus on each individual thing.
Also, the baby with the hood on in the middle is creepy.

magisuns · **Posted:** Tue Apr 21, 2009 7:45 pm

i see a picture of some chick, thrown into a city thing with a killzone render and ALOTTTTTT of c4d. it looks interesting but everything looks so overexagerrated

oh wait rogue pretty much said everything already

well kiu :]

DumboDii · **Joined:** Sep 2008 **Posts:** 2961 **Location:** Finland

Yea it is really messy. Took me a while to spot the girl at there. I think it has potential to be verry impressive and good-looking but you went overboard with almost everything.

CrimsonNuker · **Joined:** Aug 2006 **Posts:** 13791 **Location:**

AHHHHHH THE LINES X_X

MasterKojito · **Posted:** Wed Apr 22, 2009 3:09 am

To clear things up, I used one c4d and no clipping masks. Also I think I am going to go back and work on this piece later, thanks to your criticism.

Panu · **Joined:** Aug 2007 **Posts:** 3536 **Location:** Around

first thing i saw was the chicks boobs ... those are boobs right?

Nantosh · **Posted:** Wed Apr 22, 2009 4:11 am

Well I really like it, so thar

Snoopy · **Posted:** Wed Apr 22, 2009 5:33 am

Nantosh wrote:

Well I really like it, so thar

CrimsonNuker · **Joined:** Aug 2006 **Posts:** 13791 **Location:**

_Panu_ wrote:

first thing i saw was the chicks boobs ... those are boobs right?

WTF? *scrolls back up*

hitokiri · **Joined:** Feb 2006 **Posts:** 3503 **Location:** here

Yeah think a lighter opacity on the lines or thinner ones might help? confusing as others mentioned. Unless you were tryin to say Love is confusing and chaotic, then maybe i could see it

Miguez · **Joined:** Nov 2008 **Posts:** 5003 **Location:**

CrimsonNuker wrote:

_Panu_ wrote:

first thing i saw was the chicks boobs ... those are boobs right?

WTF? *scrolls back up*

*BlackFox · **Joined:** Sep 2008 **Posts:** 7923 **Location:**

Not the best I have seen, but it's still pretty cool.. lulz

IceCrash · **Posted:** Wed Apr 22, 2009 9:15 pm

i really like the way this is done
i love it
only thing that bugs me is the lines, and the light of it, i think it's too bright in some parts, kinda hurt my eyes : o

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