New Siggie.

Snoopy · **Posted:** Wed Apr 08, 2009 12:45 pm

It's EXTREMELY basic. Messed around with a Panoramic picture of Times Square, NY.

Criticism please.

Melez · **Posted:** Wed Apr 08, 2009 12:51 pm

Perhaps work on canvas size and focaling for a start. This looks nice too, though.

cin · **Posted:** Wed Apr 08, 2009 12:57 pm

i prefer the long panoramic version over your current small one

Melez · **Posted:** Wed Apr 08, 2009 1:03 pm

Yeah.... Not crop, but resize Snoopyboy.

rek · **Posted:** Wed Apr 08, 2009 2:43 pm

Nice pic. And nice text.

satman83 · **Joined:** Oct 2006 **Posts:** 9541 **Location:** London

cin wrote:

i prefer the long panoramic version over your current small one

yea.

its also a very nice picture and the text suits it very well

Swindler · **Posted:** Wed Apr 08, 2009 4:11 pm

I just love how well the text works with the rest of the piece

*BlackFox · **Joined:** Sep 2008 **Posts:** 7923 **Location:**

cin wrote:

i prefer the long panoramic version over your current small one

I totally agree with you

Hostage · **Posted:** Wed Apr 08, 2009 7:13 pm

That's a nice picture, everything seems well; good natural flow and focal, high quality. Only thing I suggest is a little colour correction and try to incorporate your text better. Right now it's extremely beginner and novice (yes yes I know you are a beginner but you get my point). You might also wanna try out the blur tool at a really low opacity to help with your depth....just pay attention to your little things other then good job, keep at it.

Snoopy · **Posted:** Wed Apr 08, 2009 9:17 pm

Thanks everyone.

@Hos; I'll work on that tonight. Thanks

Kirkaldi · **Joined:** Jul 2008 **Posts:** 3083 **Location:** nyc

Snoopy is better than me at text.

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