Hostage wrote:
^ What he said.
The first is way to over sharpened/exposed/ contrasted. To be honest I don't know what you did but I'm guessing it's one of those if not all three. I would practice your colouring.
Second is best for me aswell, nice soft look and a decent flow. I would have picked the 3rd one if there was a bit of magenta/pink thrown in there. You have an interesting style just keep practicing.

tnx, on first is sharpen,just sharpen,gradient maps and one more rander xD