HejsaN wrote:
imo its bad.. sorry but it is..
dont need to explain anything, you see it yourself.. i dont try to be mean just says what i think..
Um, tips then?
If it's your first then at least you have a good start. Some things you could work first is coloring and lighting. Some good ways to improve coloring is learning the color wheel. Gives you a good look on what colors go well with each other. As for the lighting, trunks is too bright and we don't know where the light is coming from.
Good try though. You should also look at some tutorials on basics, especially Rizla's tut:
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