NSR ~ Sprite

Swindler · **Posted:** Fri Mar 14, 2008 11:06 pm

My first sprite sig. Followed a Tutorial

C'n'C ty

HOLLAstir · **Joined:** Aug 2007 **Posts:** 1637 **Location:** 206

Text should be closer to the focal. Also, I don't think you picked a good sprite. He has a shield, looks like he should be blocking something, although you have the flow going from his feet up. Just doesn't fit. Also, with so little going on, it needs some color. If you are going to keep it b&w, add more depth and flow to it.

Snudge · **Joined:** Jun 2006 **Posts:** 4200 **Location:**

The first smudged layer in that tut is such an awesome background. A shame it got wasted like that.

Swindler · **Posted:** Sat Mar 15, 2008 2:02 pm

Here is it without b/w

Swindler · **Posted:** Sat Mar 15, 2008 2:13 pm

Hershey wrote:

its cool and all but I don't like the text you always do. it seems to never fit your pieces. but the flow from down and up is there.

just work on the text.

yeah i practicing

aazumak · **Joined:** Jun 2007 **Posts:** 918 **Location:**

i like your font, the placement is just off, and it looks good, i just think that the background is kinda ll teh same to me, i wish like 1 side varied more than the other,

other than that, its still a good sig

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