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 Post subject: My Story
PostPosted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 3:42 am 
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Well had to remake this topic because my old one did not let me upload it.

Well here it is a story i had to quickly come up with of what might happen in the medieval days. Hope you like it. Suprise twist at the end :twisted:


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Five Years King David and Claudisia have been having a marriage affair. David never really loved Claudisia he was forced into marriage when half of his fathers kingdom was destroyed by the mercyless Franks.Having no choice David had to marry Queen Claudisia and unite Croatia with Greece. David knew it was for the best for his people and himself,Now that the Two countries are united they rebuilt Fort Towers. The fort construction lasted 3years since a keep was added for protection of the royal family. King David never thought of living Claudisia , He resented her. He had once had a love, A frobidden love from a peasent woman.

Sir EdwingSton, King Davods right hand man. These two fellows have been friends since birth.Sir EdwinSton was never the jelous type , He acually liked the fact that he was a free spirit not bound to the duties of the royal family. At age thirteen Sir EdwingSton was ordered to be prince Davids personal guard. EdwingSton did not mind, He got to spend time with the prince, His best friend. At age 23 Sir EdwingSton got promoted to general rank in tghe military. At this time it was that prince dacid was forced to marry Claudisia. The country was soon to be under he forces of Frankish leaders if it was not for the help of Greece.The day that Claudisia stepped out of the carriage EdwingSton new that he had found his long forsaken soul mate.

King David walked down the great hall yhinking of his ordeal. He wore a purple coat which he had purcahsed yhtough the tax money. His silk cape waved in the wind. As he walked up the stairs he got ti the kingdom keep. The keep his private chamber of protection on top of the castle.In the top of teh castle David stared out in the abyss of the morning sun. He stared as the sun rose and awoke the spirits of the fields. Cows and goats grazing on the land. He saw a young peasent boy was already working on the fields that early in the morning, plowing the firleds with a oxen. As young as the boy was David knew that his people needed the crops.

Earlier that morning Sir EdwinSton was out on some personal business. he took with him his bow and quiver. He always travels on his trusted steed, Ge road on his Inroclad hoese down the hot summrt morning. At noon he had finally reached his destination. He was asjed ti leave his bow and quiver by the gate. At the gate there where five chinese guards, protection he thouught. He noticed a sign say General Cho. Once inside EdwingSton noyiced that the general had a map of the kingdom set up on the table. By his side were Ching -Huey and Hung Huey these two btothers are looking for a private jobs that people request of for a hegty sum.EdwingSton was planning an attack. An attack on the castle.

Back in the castle Sir EdwingSton reportedto the king that the chinese Invaders were approching the castle perimiter. He warned the king that he should go to the keep. After 2 hours the castle Siege had begun. The castle bridge was lifted with haste, Civilians inside the walls, those who made it that is. The king was safely in his keep without any of his guards, After 2 hours the Croatian soldiers were running low on arrows and had to conserve as many as they could. Sir EdwingSton was starting to get worried he did not want anyone to get killed.

in the back of the castle in the window there were two pairs of hands. Sir EdwingSton helped him up and it was the assasin. As they walked pass the soildiers on the castle walls Edwing said that it was ok he was a friend. As they walked pass all the wounded soildiers on the castle wall hey all looked out into the field, Not a poor soul in sight. Just a gew cows and goats grazing on the fields as if nothing is happening.As EdwingSton approcahed the king he made him turn around and face the window, They noticed the ram pounding on the castle wall. "Smart" said the king conserving there energy from when they break the wall". " That it is " said Edwingsont. " What i don't understand is why the chinese would trabel all this way to take over my castle. " I have to tell you" said david " I never really loved claudisi.." There the assasin appreared. He had quickly grabbed the Kings left had pull it back and with his other hand slice his throat. "No" thought EdwinSton, He did no love her after all.

As planned Edwingston opened the castle bridge, And door. General Cho ordered his men to surround the english sodiers. Now taken over the castle the siege is over. Atop the castle walls Cho went he stared at his new found land. He had more than just the castle in mind. He ordered all the Croatian soldiers killed. Sir EdwingSton could not belive his ears, he spoke up and said " You mus'nt. General Cho did not take kindly to people who disobeyed his orders. With a Thrust of his feet he had kicked EdwinSton of the castle wall. The hundred feet fall EdwingSton thought to the past. He thought of when he and King David were good friends. They went to school , and college together. EdwinSton always being the top in his Knight training he had let David win a few battles.He knew he had messed up. As Claudisia refused to follow Cho's orders she too had to taste Cho's cold hard feet.

At last this castle belonged to the chinese. None the less Cho will go down in history as the man who took over a castle. Now becoming linked to China the fortress was now a part of the Silk road.

What no one knew. The kings secret. He had for long been having an affair with a peasent woman. This being bad for the royal family reputation he had to keep his mouth shut. What the king did not know himself is that his love affair had been taken a toll further. His secret admierer was pregnent. Under the shade of the fields and the castle walls, In the fields, There will be a new legacy. Royal blood shall be reborn.



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 Post subject: Re: My Story
PostPosted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 4:30 am 
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so long T_T

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 Post subject: Re: My Story
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It was alright.... lots of spelling mistakes though
It almost would have been better if you had made it longer....you seemed to jump from one part of the story to the next it would have been nicer if you had gone from place to place in the story a little bit slower....but I know how hard it is to write a story and that was pretty good = ]


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