bboy23 wrote:
I guess it could be better, but i still could use some comments and critics on it.
you see the part that seems brushed with some diff brushes than the other ones at the left? (could be a c4d part, if so, smudgge/blur it till joo die)
You shoulda like, made that a lot smoother=smudged it/blurred it a lot, cause it takes your eyes from the focal, and a big problem in this sig, is that the render is just freaking ugly, and blackish... no colours...
but you see the funny thing, is that this ends up beeing an alright sig, BECAUSE you stablished and done a really good job with the Flow of it! It's really nice, i like it at least..
So basicly, take the left thingies and delete them, get a better render, and make the text a little smoother maybe, even tho it looks alright alredy :p (The problem isn't really the text tbh..
And then don't forget to blend the render with the bg and stuff, bla bla bla, normal stuff :p
