the little squiggle to the left , i dont like that,
but the actual sig is great,
BTW version1 ftw, that "canyon" on the right makes the sig look so much better, my next sig is so going to copy this style

the only thing i would say would be to take the big black spot on version 2, and move it so its to the left of the guys head, that way it gives it more of a focal point, and not to mention, i like the small little black spot by the work "White", it makes it very nice to read.