yeah theres alot of negative space there which makes it a bit plain. perhaps you could fix the blurry feeling to it too and add some more to it. try avoiding the filmstrip effect unless it helps the focal. it ain't bad though. KIU.
Both really need more depth. Also when doing the film strip effect don't duplicate it WITH the text, def a no no. Their not bad, but work on your depth and colors. Also on the last one, lighting is wayyyyy off, so work on your depth colors and lighting.
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