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Post subject: First sig, first post!  Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 7:35 pm |
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Could you rate and give critique to my signature? Any help is greatly appreciated..
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Post subject: Re: First sig, first post! Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 7:40 pm |
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Welcome to the AC. Hope you stick around. First sig? not bad. You have a flow, but still needs work. Also work on creating depth in your piece. Try to keep your text closer to the focal (generally your render/stock) When it's away from your main center of focus it creates multiple focals which isn't a good thing. I suggest looking up tutorials, follow them and keep practicing. If you need any help or have any questions feel free to PM me.
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Post subject: Re: First sig, first post! Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 7:58 pm |
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Wheres Crim when you need him, he used to inform all the newcommers  @ the sig, it looks a bit empty to me and the text needs work.
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Post subject: Re: First sig, first post! Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 7:59 pm |
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is mine ok ?  
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Post subject: Re: First sig, first post! Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 8:08 pm |
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Im sorry guys but whats wrong with you lol? Its his FIRST sig and it you can compare it to many of the good sigs here in SRF. He can even do these glowlines which I still cant do lol and invested already about 100 hours or more in photoshop I really like it for your first sig  Just as said fix the text and the right side.
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Post subject: Re: First sig, first post! Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 8:10 pm |
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Thank you miss yangkang,
But how/what should i fix in the text?
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Post subject: Re: First sig, first post! Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 8:44 pm |
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Well im actually male but meh :p Try different things like bringin it closer to the sprite or making the text flow in the same direction as your sig? Also you should try some different fonts 
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Post subject: Re: First sig, first post! Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 12:01 am |
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Ok I took in your advice and worked on the signature a little, so here's the result: 
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Post subject: Re: First sig, first post! Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 12:09 am |
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Awww WiCkED man looks nice
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Post subject: Re: First sig, first post! Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 3:48 am |
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hey, this ain't bad for first. A lil too monotone for my taste, so try working with mulitple colors. Also try to make the focal stand out the most, so in this case, Venom, since it's all about him, but at the same time don't count the effects out so the beauty is in the whole piece itself, if you catch my drift. But really, this is good for a first, just read up and learn from tuts, relax and make art. Welcome to the Ac btw. >:B
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Post subject: Re: First sig, first post! Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 5:39 am |
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better than my first one lol which is still their lol
yeah but u did a really good job for ur first go
good work
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Post subject: Re: First sig, first post! Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 11:11 am |
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Well the position of the font is WAY better but I would try another font ? This one looks really weird :/
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Post subject: Re: First sig, first post! Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 11:30 am |
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YangKang wrote: Well the position of the font is WAY better but I would try another font ? This one looks really weird :/ I duplicated the font, motion blurred it and erased a little, that's why it looks weird  Don't know all options yet, so I like to play around
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Post subject: Re: First sig, first post! Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 11:48 am |
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Welcome to AC really good sig for the first! Just use a different font
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