We all start of somewhere and as HOLLA said you're off to a great start. You could change the size, yes. Not as drastically as some have mentioned but a little slimer would help ^^. You know what they say " slim is in".
Personally the green bar isn't really doing it for me. Maybe if the text( if that is text) was a little clearer it would serve a better purpose. Unlike the rest I liked the text around the eyes though. It gave a nice elegant look.
Keep up the good work, hope to see more from you.
