NSR~ Sigwars

rek · **Posted:** Sat Mar 15, 2008 4:02 am

F a l l o u t b o y
v1.

v2.

By .rek

the original

Took me 20 minutes, yep and CnC please. Im gonna start posting the original aswell.

edit: darkened the left side

huejas · **Joined:** Jan 2008 **Posts:** 1804 **Location:**

honestly, i dont like it to much

sorry

rek · **Posted:** Sat Mar 15, 2008 4:15 am

Your new, so i'll explain it to you.

When you post something like that, you have to explain why you dont like it. I have never said to anyone "I dont like it

" Then just walk away from the thread.. Next time, explain why you dont like it.

huejas · **Joined:** Jan 2008 **Posts:** 1804 **Location:**

.rek wrote:

Your new, so i'll explain it to you.

When you post something like that, you have to explain why you dont like it. I have never said to anyone "I dont like it

" Then just walk away from the thread.. Next time, explain why you dont like it.

oops.
Okay well let me see, its just looks like you really didnt do anything to it...well it looks too original. Plus i like all those funky ass bg's and stuff so i guess its not the style i like.
Hows that?

EDIT: the black and white one is much better though

Millenium · **Joined:** Oct 2006 **Posts:** 2732 **Location:** Waterloo

I see some really nice coloring techniques and amazing C4d Placement for effects AND color. It really shows off your skills but the outcome isn't so great - why rekky? =(

1. Me thinks the guy is too blured. Was the stock LQ to begin with? Blurry guys are never hot guys!

2. Empty spaces at the left and right. When its empty and its a BW sig it makes it look incomplete. Your other one like the cellphone one was okay because it had colors and a bit of empty sides didn't matter.

That's all I can think of for now reK. I still love the colored pieces from you.

HOLLAstir · **Joined:** Aug 2007 **Posts:** 1637 **Location:** 206

Sorry rek, there's no going around it, I don't like it and I'll tell you why. First off, the c4d/effects over his shoulder just don't look great. The colors overall clash, and isn't it supposed to be a b&w piece? Seems like you threw in a lot of color for a b&w piece. Also, the BG doesn't have a smooth transition from the different shades of black. It's also very lopsided. You have a lot of effects on the right, while the left is very barren. The stock itself sticks out a lot to me, he's not blended in. It's really lacking in the depth department. I think you chose a bad stock to begin with, it looks very LQ. I apologize if you think my criticism was harsh, I just know you can do better then that.

_Angels · **Joined:** Nov 2007 **Posts:** 707 **Location:**

you could blend in the shoulder a lil bit cuz its popping weird out=/
in overall i think u did a nice job

rek · **Posted:** Sat Mar 15, 2008 10:58 am

It wasnt harsh. The truth.

aazumak · **Joined:** Jun 2007 **Posts:** 918 **Location:**

i feel that the contrast in darkness from the left and right look weird, but i lvoe the background and i love what little color you put in, i think its a sweet sig

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