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- New Signature
- Render : Deus Ex
- My goal here was to improve my depth technique.
- Looks better on "Dark" forums

Version One


Version Two (Liquify )

The first one is far better and it's pretty good. I'd say you sharpen the focal to increase the depth, he seems blurry. And I don't like the text :/

I like your first one, but this isn't one of your best
I understand it's for depth, but it looks way too blurry. And also, the hand, in front of the render is blurry, to a similar amount of the background, which imo looks weird.
still better than what I could do , but not one of your best

I see I see I also wish it was more colorful

For some reason, I absolutely hate it :/
The perspective of the hand just annoys me, especially since I can barely tell what it is, by the looks of it, it looks like some robotic hand, the dark spot on the hand(?) keeps my eyes shifting between that and the focal point(face)

The hand is blurred to give a sense that he's about to hit someone really fast

1. Sharpen the image and erase the sharpened backround
2. What does that text say?? i can't read it

Human Revolution

Add some flow and small shiny effects

What have you done to his Eyes? Is that Shadow?

Thats his glasses Or do you mean the yellow-ish light near his left glass? Thats a Soft Brush(Orange) on a Black Layer on Screen.