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Finished and 20 minutes of thinking and 20 minutes of working.


Advice, comments and -/10 please

did u use c4d? 8/10

i used 1 effects c4d

your text is hard to read, I think the effects went over the budget your focal could handle, my eyes dont wanna go near your focal, its drawn to the (albeit well done) effects, which overpower everything else.

So, V. Nice effects, personally, I would tone them down and create a bit more depth to improve flow into the focal, and give the text a bit more contrast from whatever is behind it.

6.995/10 (round up, just felt like pingin ya )

7/10

added an new v. Focal better?

its better but the boarder kinda killed it..