I like it more then that other tag you have. Although there a few things that bug me right off the bat. I'll start with a few positives: I like the color choice and use of effects. It lacking in the depth department. And the lightsource is a little obnoxious. You have....interesting text lol <3 but um I really just don't like the placement this time. You can't make it out, I would move it to the left of the focal. There's a lot going on near him, but after that there's nothing else to it, so adding a little more to it and more depth would help. Seems like you have a little N.E.R.D obsession

. Anyways, It's decent, just needs to be tweaked.