NSR ^ Sigwars ^ Edited

Swindler · **Posted:** Fri Feb 15, 2008 9:09 pm

First time i participate in SigWars..

C'n'C

HOLLAstir · **Joined:** Aug 2007 **Posts:** 1637 **Location:** 206

She pops out a lot. Smudge around her and blend her in. Again, it's lacking depth and contrast. The light source(s) are out of place. I see one from the right and seems like one from the left aswell. Although only one side of her face is brightened, and then her chest is really dark. It looks disperportionate. Definately stick to one light source, and then dodge/burn her chest and make it look natural. I like the effects you started to use on the left side, just needs to be less bright and needs more contrast.

Swindler · **Posted:** Fri Feb 15, 2008 9:18 pm

HOLLAstir wrote:

She pops out a lot. Smudge around her and blend her in. Again, it's lacking depth and contrast. The light source(s) are out of place. I see one from the right and seems like one from the left aswell. Although only one side of her face is brightened, and then her chest is really dark. It looks disperportionate. Definately stick to one light source, and then dodge/burn her chest and make it look natural. I like the effects you started to use on the left side, just needs to be less bright and needs more contrast.

gonna try to edit a little now

Hostage · **Posted:** Fri Feb 15, 2008 9:18 pm

HOLLAstir wrote:

She pops out a lot. Smudge around her and blend her in. Again, it's lacking depth and contrast. The light source(s) are out of place. I see one from the right and seems like one from the left aswell. Although only one side of her face is brightened, and then her chest is really dark. It looks disperportionate. Definately stick to one light source, and then dodge/burn her chest and make it look natural. I like the effects you started to use on the left side, just needs to be less bright and needs more contrast.

Taken out of context I know but I lol'ed.......I iz sorry

HOLLAstir · **Joined:** Aug 2007 **Posts:** 1637 **Location:** 206

Hostage wrote:

HOLLAstir wrote:

She pops out a lot. Smudge around her and blend her in. Again, it's lacking depth and contrast. The light source(s) are out of place. I see one from the right and seems like one from the left aswell. Although only one side of her face is brightened, and then her chest is really dark. It looks disperportionate. Definately stick to one light source, and then dodge/burn her chest and make it look natural. I like the effects you started to use on the left side, just needs to be less bright and needs more contrast.

Taken out of context I know but I lol'ed.......I iz sorry

Yeah, didn't quite word that right lol. Oh well

Swindler · **Posted:** Fri Feb 15, 2008 9:27 pm

Any better or worse ?

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