HOLLAstir wrote:
It's decent. His face looks bleach white, seems like dodge and burning a little bit would have softened that up. I like the color scheme, but don't like the "Ol3n" text. I like the flow around the stock/render but you have a little pink line in the lower left and it doesn't really quite seem to "fit" in. Just personally looks out of place. In agreement with cin, There's a lot of empty grey space. It feels really empty. Although I do like what you have done, just feel like it needs more. Maybe a slightly darker of a pink on your border, hard to see. <3
The pink wavy line shouldnt be there, I thought I took that away (had a flow issue when I started).
And "The pale face" was intentional but I guess it doesnt really look as good as I thought.
The border is bright because other forums I visit have black backrounds.
Ill see if I can add some black around the edges and some more contrast to the backround.
Mind if I ask why you dont like the text?