converging roads--- yay :P

aazumak · **Joined:** Jun 2007 **Posts:** 918 **Location:**

i edited it:P

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i like 2 and 4 the best

what are ur comments and ratings

ripe them up

edit:

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ok two new 1'a ^^

and da origional premise behind it all before it all got blurred n such

rek · **Posted:** Sun Jul 15, 2007 3:18 pm

v1. More clearer than the rest. Make you focal clearer and change ur text.

Rizla · **Posted:** Sun Jul 15, 2007 9:21 pm

def not 1, its very oversaturated.

2/4 cant decide either, text needs major work - cant read converging, dont like the double caps in your name.

TwelveEleven · **Joined:** Mar 2007 **Posts:** 3806 **Location:** Heaven

Well it's not my kinda style, it's totally confusing when you first look at it. Imo a signature should be very clear the moment someone sees it. If not, you should make an art piece out of it.

Just like rek's and rizla's signatures. They look great, but what are you saying with them? If you want to bring the world a message, imho you should do it in an beautiful artwork. Because a signature would just ruin the feeling you get when you look at a wonderful piece of art, in a tiny little box. Though as a fellow 'artist' I greatly respect it. However as someone who is not interessted in art at all, you will just think: "Omfg what a stupid sig, it doesn't even say which level he is!!" Stuff like that.

Further comments:
- Needs a focal point
- Text should be clearer
- the broad white line would look better if it's smaller
- the border could be smaller imo
- Make the left side less seperated from the rest

Rizla · **Posted:** Sun Jul 15, 2007 9:49 pm

sigs are art, just in small dimensions.

TwelveEleven · **Joined:** Mar 2007 **Posts:** 3806 **Location:** Heaven

Rizla wrote:

sigs are art, just in small dimensions.

TwelveEleven wrote:

Because a signature would just ruin the feeling you get when you look at a wonderful piece of art, in a tiny little box

I agree that it's art..

Rizla · **Posted:** Sun Jul 15, 2007 10:09 pm

Many of us stick to sigs/tags as hobbies as opposed to larger pieces because it lets us practice fundamental skills in something we dont invest much emotion in. I dont have the time to work on large pieces (hardly ever these days) I have a new client every week it seems, and Im not done with school yet either.

TwelveEleven · **Joined:** Mar 2007 **Posts:** 3806 **Location:** Heaven

Rizla wrote:

Many of us stick to sigs/tags as hobbies as opposed to larger pieces because it lets us practice fundamental skills in something we dont invest much emotion in. I dont have the time to work on large pieces (hardly ever these days) I have a new client every week it seems, and Im not done with school yet either.

Yes, well that can be. But with this piece of art I just feel like it could be way more, and I don't get that with most of your work.. And shouldn't just be art in a smaller box. Let the world know you're out there, and release it as a beautiful bigger sized image.

Ell · **Joined:** Oct 2006 **Posts:** 3281 **Location:**

Art doesn't have size restrictions.

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