Hmm...
In all honesty I don't like this style. Its lacking so much compared to some of your other tags.
For Example:

That tag has good lighting, depth and effects. The lighting could be slightly improved but nevertheless it was a good tag.
Now this tag looks strange to me. The composition needs work because the dragon placement is a bit awkward as well as its missing half a body. You tried to go over it with black soft brushes but that just makes it look like a lazy shortcut.